lunes, 21 de septiembre de 2009

SECOND ESSAY °°°MY EVOLUTION IN ELECTRONIC LITERACY°°°

°*°*MY EVOLUTION IN ELECTRONIC LITERACY*°*°



Nowadays, the use of electronic tools has taken importance for doing several things. First of all, it is important to mention how I started to use computers. Because of the necessity of having formality in some important documents, in secondary school, I had to start using the computer. At the beginning I did not know how to use it, but my brother taught me the most essential tools. It was not difficult because I was interested on that, so I could learn easily. Secondly, I had the necessity of starting to use Internet when I entered to high school. It was because I had to look for specific information to fulfill some homework. I faced some problems because I did not know how to use these electronic tools. My brother was the person who helped me to learn how to use them. Doing this, I found some advantages and disadvantages.


Electronic tools, as everything, have advantages and disadvantages. Talking about computers, they are really useful to keep much information related to any topics; in addition, we can have photo albums, music, videos, etc. Some disadvantages are that computers waste too much electricity; also they can cause visual problems. It is because people force much their sight. On the other hand, internet is a very useful tool to look for any information; for example, recipes, tips, fashion, jokes, pictures, videos, etc. In addition, if we want information and the address of certain place, we can use satellite navigators to locate a street or an avenue; also we can buy many things. Sometimes these two advantages are disadvantages. These purchases are not legal or true, so people are swindled. Another one is that because students have to hand in homework, there is much plagiarism. Certainly, computers and internet have been used since the past for educational purposes.


These two important tools, computers and internet, have been really useful. I have used them since secondary school. Nowadays, I have the opportunity to see many improvements about computers and internet; for example, dictionaries, translators, etc. These agents have helped me to improve my knowledge about learning English language. It is because through internet and computers I can look for information about the language, also I can practice it. It has influenced in a positive way because surfing the net I could practice and learn better another language. Some of my strengths using electronic tools are that I know how to use some tools that computers and internet give us; such as blogs, mails, word processors, etc. On the contrary, there are some weaknesses that do not permit me have a good development using these tools. It is because there are many improvements in computers and internet, so I do not know everything that these agents offer.


Talking about word processors, they are kind of complex. On one hand, there are the ones that almost every computer has. That is Word, Excel, Power Point, etc. These tools are really helpful for several things. Using them, we are able to hand in homework with a good presentation; we can make mathematic calculations, presentations to show any topic, etc. Sometimes we do not know all the tools that these processors have; they are infinite. On the other hand we have e-mails, chats, blogs, etc. These spaces are useful to communicate with any person. To illustrate, we can be chatting with a person who is in the other side of the world, with blogs we can be seen and known by any person. I have to mention that it could be dangerous.


It seems that electronic tools are still improving, so we have to be prepared for the future. Researchers from the Technological Institute of Georgia have found that this is not all about computers, and that something better is going to come. They explain that computers are going to be faster that now and that word processors are going to be better. I expect that we improve next to these electronic tools, so we have to deal with these advances. I have been thinking that online courses, masters, degrees, etc are essential to improve my L2, so I will consider taking one of these courses because it is something that sometimes is free.


In short, electronic tools are common nowadays; we did not have the opportunity of using them in the past. As it was said, I have improved my electronic literacy during the time, but I think it is not enough. We could see that computers and internet have advantages and disadvantages and the usefulness that they have. Additionally, these agents have improved and influenced my learning of a new language. It was said that word processors have lots of tools to make us do good homework, presentations, etc. Finally, it is important to take into consideration that internet offers us hundreds of opportunities to improve our knowledge. I think that this technology is going up every day. To conclude, we have to be prepared to face all the advances and surprises that electronic tools have to offer to us.







MY EVOLUTION IN ELECTRONIC LITERACY

OUTLINE

I. INTRODUCTION
  • The beginning
a) How did I start using electronic tools?
  1. Computers
  2. Internet
b) Difficulties that I faced

II. BODY
     Paragraph 1
a) Advantages and disadvantages
  1. Computers
  2. Internet
b) Usefulness in education in the past

      Paragraph 2
a) My experiences with electronic tools nowadays
  1. How have electronic tools influenced/improved my L1/L2?
  2. My strenghts and weaknesses in electronic literacy
       Paragraph 3
a) Usefulness of word processors
  1. Word, Excel, Power Point, etc.
  2. e-mail, chat, blogs, etc.
      
       Paragraph 4
  • Future
a) Expectations and plans regarding electronic tools
b) Online courses, master, degrees
c) Educational or professional research using electronic tools

III. CONCLUSION

a) Restate thesis
b) Restate each topic
c) Comments
d) Concluding sentence

domingo, 13 de septiembre de 2009

FINAL DRAFT °°° INTRODUCTORY ESSAY°°°

INTRODUCTORY ESSAY

°°°ABOUT ME°°°


There are many people that have met me, but they do not really know me. So who am I? I am Martha Jessica Cadengo Lizarán, but I like to be called Jessi. I was born in Aguascalientes City on February 23rd, 1990. I am 19 years old. I have a small but great family; that is, my mom, my brother, and I. Few years ago my parents got divorced. Nowadays my father is living with his new wife. On one hand, my mother works in the Technological University of Aguascalientes; on the other hand, my brother, who is 24 years old, works in Jatco Mexico.


In order for you to know me better, I have to mention my likes and dislikes. Talking about what I like to eat, I like Mexican food, in special gorditas, green pozole, and tacos. What I really do not like is Japanese food, neither Chinese. Talking about sports, I love some of them, but I do not practice them frequently. I really like extreme sports; in addition, I have had the opportunity of feeling the adrenaline by practicing some of these sports. I do not like all those sports that involve fighting; it is because I am a very calm girl. Talking about hobbies and other interests, on one hand, I like to dance a lot, also camping and being in touch with nature; on the other one I do not like reading and being in closed places.


I have had lots of experiences, but now I am going to talk about two of my best trips. Last year I went with my brother and my mom to the state of Hidalgo; it was the most awesome trip I ever had. Everything in this travel was perfect. Additionally, I had the opportunity to “fly”; it means, I traveled by tirolesas. On July we went to a river where we practiced Shotover and Rafting. Then we went to Acapulco, but we did not like that place. Consequently, we went to Ixtapa; there we spent two days in an amazing hotel, all inclusive. I have to admit that Ixtapa is a paradise.


Everyone has their plans for the future. Let´s talk about my near future. Firstly, I will go to the beach again, next November. My grandfather is organizing a trip, so my family and I will go to Barra de Navidad beach. I am really excited because I really like this places and Ixtapa trip was not enough. Secondly, it is missing just five months for my next birthday; therefore, I will have a party. My 20th birthday will take place on February 26th, 2010 in my house. I want a band, a sinaloense one, to play in my party. Now, I just have 2000 pesos to pay for this band, so if one of you wants to cooperate, it will be well received.


You already know about my near future, so I am going to talk about my future in general. First of all, I want to have a job as a teacher in a public and private school; it means that I want to work teaching children. This plan involves finishing my B. A. which is English Language Teaching. I really want to finish it because I really like to study this, also I like children a lot. In addition, I want to have my own house and my own truck. I dream with a house with a big backyard and with a Ford Explorer Sport Truck. Another plan for the future is, from 5 to 8 years, that I want to get married and have, at least, one baby. I want to have three kids in total.


Some people already know how and who I am, but some others do not know me. All these words showed more details about me; for example, my complete name, my likes and dislikes about food, sports and interests, my life experiences, and my plans for the near and general future. Now that you know me better, I want you to know that you can trust me for everything; so I can be the friend who you were looking for!